My TED Talk Analysis covers Kenneth Shinozuka’s
speech about his grandfather with dementia, which he gave November 2014 at
TEDYouth 2014, an official TED conference. A common problem amongst people with
dementia and their caretakers is that many people with dementia wander off, and
teen inventor
Kenneth Shinozuka came up with a novel solution to help his night-wandering
grandfather.
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Kenneth Shinozuka |
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Shinokzuka's Statistic About Dementia-Wandering |
Kenneth begins his speech with logos and explains why his
invention is so important to society. He portrays a statistic proving that 65%
of people with dementia wander, and then he uses pathos by providing the
audience a personal story about his grandfather with dementia.
One day, while
taking care of his grandfather, he missed his grandpa walking out of bed, and
he couldn’t find his grandfather for he called “the most terrifying five
minutes of his life.” He finally found him, but was not satisfied. Kenneth set
out to invent something that would not only ensure his grandfather’s safety,
but also to ease his aunt’s anxiety of taking care of him. He invented a
dementia-specialized pressure sensor sock to be put on the foot of the person
with dementia while he or she sleeps. Then, Kenneth explains his ethos – that he
has been very interested in science technology since he was six years old when
a family friend fell and was injured in a bathroom.
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Kenneth's accomplishments in the field of science as a kid. |
Kenneth illustrates his
whole plan and process of invention to his audience, including his original
timeline. He taught himself the science behind the pressure sensor through
YouTube tutorials and various textbooks, and taught himself the coding the
decoding in order to connect the pressure sensor to his smart phone. He had
been trying out the pressure sensor on his grandpa for a year when he gave the
talk and guarantees a 100% success rate.
Kenneth assumes his audience knows nothing about science or
dementia, so he speaks in very lay terms. He provides his listeners with a
visual demonstration of his pressure sensor invention by bringing out a sock
model on stage, and he talks with a very relaxed and easy voice. Kenneth had to
provide everything for his audience, since dementia isn’t exactly a common
knowledge topic amongst normal people. When the sock model stepped onto the
floor with the pressure senor on, the app on Kenneth’s smart phone beeped and
alerted him of the situation. The demonstration worked, and the audience
rewarded Kenneth with an ovation. Kenneth’s speech is very well organized, and
he is consistently referring to a very informative power-point.
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Kenneth uses visual aid as part of his speech. |
The only
constructive criticism I had watching was that he doesn’t speak with the
passion or interest that I would expect someone who developed such an invention
to have. One can sense a nervous and uncomfortable energy watching him, and it
takes away from the overall performance and demonstration of technological
brilliance.
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